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雅思写作高分开头的9个方法

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摘要:雅思写作高分开头的9个方法

  雅思写作包含两篇作文,而且通常雅思写作阅卷考官都比较严谨,雅思写作要想取得高分的话就一定要做好充足的准备,开头结尾与主体段的写作任何一项都不能缺少。今天小编将给烤鸭们分享9个雅思写作开头的方法,希望对烤鸭们有所帮助。

  1.通过媒体报道把问题呈现在读者面前,引发思考

  例如在写关于该不该禁烟的话题时,可以这样开头:

  A recent study conducted by Zhongshan University has found that the numberof smokers has been increasing sharply over the pastfive years. Researchfindings also reveal that the incidence of smoking-related conditions hassoared. As a result, the ban on smoking has been in the spotlight.

  中山大学最近做的一个研究表明,在过去五年里,吸烟人数急剧上升。研究结果同时显示,吸烟导致的疾病发病率也急剧增长。因此,禁烟成为一个热点话题。这个开头通过媒体报道把问题呈现在读者面前,从而引出吸烟比例急剧上升造成的危害,引发读者思考。

  2.提出有争议性的问题,激发读者兴趣,使其积极参与讨论

  例如在写到警察是否应该持枪这篇文章时作者说:   If police in the U.K. are able to go without guns and not have crimegetting completely out of control then they have already set a fine example thatother countries should follow. The fact that they are able to do this is anindication of their ability to control the flow of guns to the general populaceand this makes citizens safer than anything else. To a civilian, taking gunsaway from criminals is more important than giving them to police.

  提出这个有争议的话题,激发读者的兴趣,使读者积极参与到讨论中来,让大家各抒己见进行讨论。

  3.引起读者兴趣的话题

  例如在写关于体罚的话题文章时,采用这样一个开头:   It is reported that a boy in Zhuhai was beaten to death by his father onFather' Day. Ample evidence also shows that children who are frequently abusedby their parents or teachers tend to be introverted, pessimistic, indifferentand even world-weary. Recently, there has arisen a fierce argument on whethercorporal punishment should be abolished. Teachers, parents and experts takediverse attitudes towards this issue.

  据报道,在父亲节那天,珠海有个小男孩被爸爸打死了。充分的证据也显示,经常遭父母或老师虐待的小孩往往比较内向、悲观、冷漠甚至厌世。近来,关于是否应该废除体罚出现了一场激烈的争论,老师、家长和专家各执一词。

  当读者看到这个话题时产生了浓厚的兴趣进而引起了对这件事情的思考。

  4.呈现该话题正反方的观点

  例如在写到男性和女性谁可以做更好的父母时可以这样开头:

  At the mere mention of women governing the world, most of us may naturallyform an unrealistic picture of a more peaceful world where the sun alwaysshines. The other side of the picture, however, is just to the opposite.

  在开头提出两种不同的观点,不同的读者可以根据自己对问题的看法进行思考,从而引发读者的探究心理,进一步思考这个问题从而得出结论。

  5.引用名人名言、谚语等作为文章的开头

  例如在写到先天跟后天哪一个更重要时,“Genius is two percent inspiration and ninety-eightpercent perspiration” is the opinion held by Edison. This remark has beenconfirmed time and again by more and more people.

  “天才是百分之二的灵感,百分之九十八的汗水”是爱迪生的观点,而且反复被越来越多的人所证实,通过引用名人名言揭示了文章的主题,为下文很好地做了铺垫。

  6.对将要讨论的话题进行定义

  例如在写到Globalization时:

  Globalization-the international spread of products, ideas andinformation-is bringing the world closer together. But globalization is not anew concept. For thousands of years, nations have roamed the earth in search ofnew markets and new sources of raw materials for their own industries.

  关于"全球化"这个名词,考生并不陌生,但是怎样用合理的语言来赋予它一个含义,这并非易事,上述的引言段就很好地做到了这一点,先是从字面上诠释了"全球化"的定义,进而又从实际生活角度赋予了它另外一层含义。

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