雅思写作Task2段落论证

2016-03-03 环球教育

　　一、现状：

　　雅思考官在评判一篇大作文时，除了看文章的结构和语言之外，还很重视这篇文章的主体内容。而中国考生在写essay时常见的问题恰恰是考前准备了语言，临场读懂了题目，很快形成了观点，但是却不知该从哪些角度来支持自己的thesisstatement。所以主体段落观点单调，思维陈旧，内容空洞，为凑足字数而把一个观点写了再写，这些问题常常会充斥在文章中。

　　二、如何做?

　　雅思大作文的主体段是整篇雅思作文的核心，在这个部分大家可以应用实例论证的写作方法，这样既可以增加字数，也有说服力，是非常实用的写作方法。下面小编就通过两个例子来为大家更加清晰地介绍一下这个方法。

　　1)第一种应用实例论证的写作方法就是应用名人或国家实例，因为这是大家都知道的事情，能够引起共鸣。

　　It is generally accepted that the majority ofleadersqualify perseverance. Typical example is Nelson Mandela, whowas the south blackpolitical leader and former president, wasawarded 1993 Nobel Peace for hisefforts to antiracism andantiapartheid. In spite of more than a quarter centuryofimprisonment, he still dedicates his life for the human rights andracialequality. Another case is Mother Teresa, who was the winnerof the Nobel Peace,devoted the majority of her life to helping thepoor inIndia

　　althoughshe was exposed to diverse adversities.

　　在这个雅思大作文主体中，引用了曼德拉和特丽莎的事迹来加以论证。他们是家喻户晓的人物，而且黑人权利和穷人的生活与权力的改善和提高也是大家都知晓的。通过这个例子来说明在适当的时候学会坚持是很有说服力的。在举例时，最好选择一些大家都知晓的，这样才能更有说服力。

　　2)第二种雅思写作方法就是应用考生自己的亲身经历来加以论证。

　　Admittedly, there is one majorreason why people fail tobalance their life and work. Modern communicationtechnology seemsto be primary culprit. At present, I frequently bring the workhome,sending emails to my employers related to work placement orproposals;similarly, working as a surgeon, my father regularlysupervises relevantemergent cases via mobile phones when he is on avacation.

　　在这个雅思大作文主体中，在提出主题句后，先是加以论述，然后用回到家和度假作为例子。用自己的亲身经历和感受来论证人们不能平衡工作和生活的关系，这样的论证非常鲜活。

　　3)还可以运用自己的观察进行举实例论证。

　　Unquestionably, it isadvertising that gives general publicaccess to two major strengths related totheir life. The optimalfacet is that practical information is available topopulace withdifferent age groups. Take tourism packing as a specific case,thegraying population are likely to make wise decision where to travelthanksto diverse publicity on the advertising. Similarly, thanks toadvertising, theyouth tend to have access to their appealingdigital products, like mobile phones,cameras… Luckily, mid-agedmigrant workers seem to seek for their ideal jobsattributing torecruiting advertising. Another possibility is that itseducationalfunction. A case in point is the publicity related towildlifeprotection. Watching such public service advertisement,audiences are likely torefuse to enjoy shark fin soap or wearclothes made from endangered species. Likewise,touched by imagesexposed on TV, general public may regularly visit theirparents,showing filial piety towards them.

　　以上就是关于实例论证的雅思大作文主体部分的写作方法的内容，大家可以在平时自己搜集一些相关的名人事迹或是自己身边的相关的有代表性的事情，这样就可以在雅思大作文主体部分的写作中进行应用了。

　　另外，小编还为大家整理了另一个雅思大作文技巧——对比。对比是雅思大作文写作中的方法，因为使用对比可以突出主题，也可以使文章更为吸引人。对比方法在雅思大作文写作中的应用很多，可以把对比应用在事例中，也可以应用在顺序中。

　　1)通过比较和对比方式来论证，这样两个事的利弊就非常明显。

　　Unquestionably, electronic media is thefastest. A case in point isthat alarge number of rescue teams aroundChina

　　instantly rushed to the tunnel suffered from severe mudslideinSichuanprovince withinan hour when information was covered on theTencent internet, while suchcoverage on the newspapers seems to beaccessible to relevant sectors the nextday.

　　2)通过现在与过去的对比方式，所写对象的特征就显而易见了。

　　Admittedly,remarkable transitions have occurredtoWUXI

　　.The outstanding facet seems to refer to its environment aroundthe neighborhood.In the past, silt and debris used to be dumped bycitizens, resulting in smellyrivers and streams, especially in therural area. At present, however, withcharming vegetation andgreening area surrounded, living surrounding has beenperfectlypromoted. Another important transition is that public transportispretty convenient. Years ago, buses frequency was so extremelylow that thevast majority of people were accustomed to driving. Onthe contrary, not onlyhas municipal government in WUXI launches thevast sum on the shuttle buses,subways or taxis, but also thepublicity on the preferential policies motivatescitizens to opt foreco-friendly means of transport.

　　这篇雅思大作文写作的内容是对周边环境发生变化进行论证。对比点是：以前居住环境的脏和臭，而变化后有了绿化和居民环保意识的改变，使得环境得以改变的事实。应用这样的雅思大作文写作方法，段落的主题句能够得到有力的论证。

　　以上就是关于雅思大作文写作方法的介绍，大家通过上面的两个例子可以看到，这两个论证方法在雅思大作文写作中是非常有用的，都能起到非常关键的点题作用。所以考生们在雅思大作文的备考中可以进行适当的应用。