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读了那么多写作例文,你会将其合理应用吗?

2019-06-25

众所周知,雅思写作是大家英语学习成果的一个输出表现。那么没有输入自然就没有输出。在明白了这个道理之后,很多烤鸭在备考阶段都会大量地阅读一些写作范文。这的确是行之有效的办法。但与此同时,也有一些烤鸭开始抱怨说:范文倒是读了不少,但是就没读到自己当天考试的那一篇。仰天长叹,感觉自己和雅思的孽缘还是未了。难道我们读例文,非得读到我们在考场中考的那一篇吗?那概率是不是也太低了呢?




今天陆哲老师带着大家一起说说,如何合理地使用我们读过的那些范文。

例如,今年的6月13日的考题为:

Some people say individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, and only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20190613

这着实是一个老题重现,其实在2014年的时候考过这个题目的原型。并且在2018年的时候,这个题目的变形也在考场中和大家见过面。虽如此,在备考阶段考生读过原题范文的概率还是极其有限。

那么我们先来看看2018年它的变形题目是什么样的,并附送一篇范文。

Governments should make people responsible for looking after their local environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20180414

In most places of the world, environmental problems are plaguing both governments and their people, and accordingly those governments are trying many methods to cope with environmental pollution. One of these methods is giving the local people responsibility for looking after the local environment. From my perspective, this is definitely a futile way.

Initially, in spite of the awareness that the public have for protecting the environment, most of them have no professional knowledge or skills to be responsible for dealing with environmental issues. Some pollutants are invisible or intangible, and they can only be detected and measured by professional equipment that the public do not have or are not able to operate. Instead, obviously some governmental offices and research institutes are the organizations with the ability for doing this.

Additionally, local people have no power of law enforcement. Once they discover someone or some factories are polluting their local environment, there is still no effective way for them to stop the detrimental behaviors. What they can do is inform related governmental offices only. This is to say, governments ought to be the role with the most responsibility for suppressing the environmental pollution.

Eventually, it is undeniable that every individual should be involved in protecting the environment. Notwithstanding, what they can do is cooperate with governments, follow their instructions and obey related rules and regulations. Most people have no initiative but they are enforced by governments. Hence, the public participation in environmental issues is not the excuse for governments to pass the buck.

To sum up, protecting the environment is the inescapable responsibility of governments. Meanwhile, individuals do play significant roles in this, and however in most cases what individuals can do is restricted or strongly recommended by some rules or policies from governments. By analogy, giving the public responsibility for supervising their local environment does not make any sense.


那我们该如何利用这篇范文,写出一篇符合20190613题目要求的文章呢?其实方法有很多。但是各位烤鸭的基础不同,所以要选择自己合适的方式。我们逐个分析讲解一下。

一、用观点和话题词汇

毫无疑问,这两个题目的话题分类都是环境类话题,并且都是在强调承担环保责任方面的论述。对于那些基础较好的烤鸭们而言,完全可以在阅读范文的时候,整理出一些话题词汇和用法。化为己用,然后在自己的文章里面果断将其表达出来。这样,不仅文章仍然有自己特色,也很容易就能满足数段的评分标准。

二、用段落或句子

如果烤鸭们英语基础不是十分给力,那么就可以将这个范文的主体段落直接应用于自己的文章之中。即使段落不能完全应用,句子的使用还是非常有可能的。所以,针对那些基础薄弱,尤其是语法基础较弱的考生而言,背诵段落,记忆句子是非常有效的办法。当然,在记忆开头段和结尾段的时候大家一定要慎重。因为开头段和结尾段都应该十分对题,如果不是一个题目,其实很难通用。但是主体段落,只要是同一类别话题,通用性较高。


三、背诵全文

其实,这是一个不是办法的办法。通常而言针对那些基础非常有限的同学,我们才会要求大家背诵全文。背诵全文之后,大家在考场中自然可以将全文写出。但是,如此一来在问题回应程度一项的得分通常不会太高。除非真的是考到了背过范文的题目。否则此项得分都比较有限。但是,其他几项得分会比较理想。平均之后,也很可能能够达到考生的分数要求。

总而言之,背诵是没有办法的办法。基础较好的烤鸭们应该学会分析范文,总结重点内容,并且将其化为己用。此为写作之道也。

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