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2021-01-20 环球教育

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原题如下:

The full-time university students have spent much time on studying, so that some people think that they also need to take part in other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 20200801


作文解析



行文框架:

开头段:点明立场

主一段:原因一

主二段:原因二

结尾段:重申立场



开头段:

No one can deny the primary task for college students is focusing on their academic study by which they can be equipped with sufficient professional knowledge for their future life and career. Nonetheless, this does not imply other sorts of activities can be thought as distractions for them. In fact, what is imperative for those students is comprehensive abilities other than the only academic one.


主一段:

Initially, after graduation those students will certainly be employed in some workplaces where they have to face far more complicated environment than they used to meet in university. Good communication skills are indispensable, and those skills can be seen as basic ones for them to deal with relatively complex interpersonal relationships. Obviously, those skills are not what students can grasp from academic study, but some club activities where students are usually arranged to meet people with various backgrounds in order to extend their social circles.


主二段:

On top of this, teamwork spirit is also what those students cannot survive without. In contemporary society, everyone must be a member of one or many teams, and how to cooperate with others is definitely essential for him or her. People have to be clear about the role they play in a team and clearly know their responsibility in order to ensure the team work effectively and efficiently. As to college students, extra curriculum activities like team sports are means to make students get used to working in a team as an active team member.


结尾段:

To sum up, comprehensive abilities that college students are supposed to gain are not confined with the said two at all. In addition to paying adequate attention to their academic study, students in university also ought to spare their time to participate in other activities since university education does not mean merely taking classes or doing homework.


总结如下:

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