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零基础雅思作文满分怎么写?

2020-09-28 环球教育

  雅思作文并非是字数越多越好,同时还必须要简洁明了地将自己的观点表达。本文为大家带来了雅思作文满分怎么写。


  雅思作文满分怎么写一:避免空洞的单词和词组


  1.一些空洞的单词又或是词组根本不可以给句子带来其它有关的或重要的信息,完全能够被删掉。例如下面的句子:


  When all things are considered,young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents,in my opinion.


  这句话里的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全能够去掉。改为:


  Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.


  2.有的空洞和繁琐的表达方式可以进行替换,例如:


  Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents,they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.


  “due to the fact that”其实是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子,可以替换,简化为下面的表达方式:


  Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents,they did not have the options that young people have now.


  雅思作文满分怎么写二:避免重复


  1.尽可能的避免重复使用同样的词汇。又或者有时尽管词汇没有重复,但意思却有重复。此时能做一些简化的工作。


  2.有时一个词组可以用一个更简单的单词来替换


  雅思作文满分怎么写三:选择比较恰当的语法结构


  选择合适的语法结构能够让句子意思的表达更加简练。尽管语法的多样性也很重要,但选择比较恰当的语法结构依然是更为重要的考虑因素。以下原则是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则:


  1.一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的比较重要的意思。


  2.避免频繁使用“there be”结构,


  3.把从句改成是短语或单词。


  4.只是在需要强调宾语而并非是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。


  5.用更为准确的一个动词来代替动词短语,例如下面这句话:


  My grandfather didn't have time to stand around doing nothing with his school friends.


  Stand around doing nothing其实可以用一个动词来表达,即loiter:


  My grandfather didn't have time to loiter with his school friends.


  有时两句话的信息经过组合完全可以用一句话来简练地表达,例如:


  Profits from the farm were not large.Sometimes they were too small to meet the expenses of running a farm.They were not sufficient to pay for a university degree.


  两句话的信息可以合并为下面这句更为简洁的句子:


  Profits from the farm were sometimes too small to meet operational expenses,let alone pay for a university degree.


  以上是关于雅思作文满分怎么写的建议,希望文章里的这些信息考生们能认真的阅读。




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