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7.27雅思写作真题思路解析(附7分范文)及 8.1口语写作预测

2019-07-29 环球教育

7月27日的考试结束,据说这一场考试比较简单,不知道大家能顺利出分么~我们先来看一下这一次由环球老师带来的写作范文解析~

07-27 混合类 – 教育话题

Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be consequences for these children when they grow up?

题目大意:

有些父母满足孩子的一切要求。这对孩子好吗?孩子长大后会有什么后果?

思路:

题目有两个问题,需要明确一一回应,即2个主体段,第一段回应对孩子是否有好处;第二段回应对长大后的影响。

对于第一个问题,建议能用批判性思维,对这个抽象的’good’,从不同的角度予以分析后再给出最终定论。如可以从物质满足的角度,以及孩子全面成长的角度,分别讨论后,得出是好是坏。

对于第二个问题,就可以在第一个问题得出的结论,予以展开。

关键词 :

Good:是一个含糊抽象的词,可以从不同角度解读,再给出最终的定论。

consequences for these children when they grow up:要紧扣对孩子未来的影响,

提纲梳理如下:


范文

It is true that some parents tend to meet all requirements of their children. While people take different attitudes towards the influences on children, I would say whether it is a bless or not is a complicated problem that depends on how we define the meaning of ‘good’, and I am also not optimistic to its profound influence on the younger generation.

On the materialistic level,this permissive rearing style is certainly understandable –children who have all their requirements met and are allowed to do whatever they like can fully enjoy the warmth from parents and are more likely to cultivate a stronger self-esteem. Nevertheless, from a more comprehensive perspective, the materialistic satisfaction mentioned above can be considered from an opposite angle: the overindulgence will inevitably lead to many character flaws, say, the lack of self-discipline, the incapability of behavior control, and over reliance on parents, all of which will exert detrimental effects on their later life.

One problem that should attribute to the indulgent parenting is that many of such children are prone to juvenile delinquency. Without self-control of their greed and behaviors, which should have been cultivated at an early age, I doubt these children will obey any regulations or laws when grown up. As well as committing crimes, another apprehension we cannot afford to ignore is the ineptitude, a consequence of their lack of independence since childhood. Such a defect will become the major obstacle in their future careers, from job hunting to problem solving, not to mention the numerous challenges in a competitive adult world.

In conclusion, the relentless responsiveness from parents is detrimental to the younger generation both in their formation of character in childhood and will cast a shadow in their later life.

相关词汇:

Optimistic 乐观的

Permissive 纵容的

Self-esteem 自信

Overindulgence 溺爱

Reliance 依赖

Indulgent 溺爱的

Parenting 家教

juvenile delinquency 少年犯罪

ineptitude 无能

Responsiveness 回应

8月1日场口语高频话题

1.去过的公园

Describe a park or garden you visited and liked.

2.理想的房子

Describe an ideal home (house or apartment) that you would like to live in.

3.实用的技能

Describe a practical skill you know.

4.广告

Describe an advertisement that left you a deep impression

5.喜欢的歌手或乐队

Describe a singer or band that you like

6.外语说得好的人

Describe a person who speak foreign language well

7.曾经不喜欢的科目

Describe a subject you didn't like before but have interest in now.

8.给别人的建议

Describe a time you gave advice to others.


近期写作考题回顾

7月20日

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Many people aim to achieve a balance between work and other parts of lives,but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problems ? How to overcome it?

7月18日

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The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous governments' expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

7月6日

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Nowadays more and morebusiness trainings and meetings are taking place online. Do the advantagesoutweigh the disadvantages?

6月29日

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Some people claim that many things that children are taught at school are a waste of time. Other people argue that everything study at school are useful at some time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

6月22日

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More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think advantages of this trend for individuals overweigh the disadvantages for environment?

2019年6月13日

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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

2019年6月1日

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Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe effective measures can be taken to improve this situation.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

2019年5月23日

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In many parts of theworld, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why do you think thisis the case? How should children and teenagers be punished?

2019年5月18日

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4 weeks' holiday can make employees do better at job. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2019年5月11日

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Most of world’s problems are caused by over-population. To what extent do you agree ordisagree?

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